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 h2. Background
 
-Date: late 24th century AD
+Date: Late 24th century, AD
 Region: Local Interstellar Cloud, distance inhibited by space travel technology. Antimatter drives offer speeds up to 78% of the speed of light. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Local_Interstellar_Cloud
 
 h2. Gameplay
 
-Xonotic single player will become a strategic fps. Eventfully carrying game modes to multilayer. Focus will stay on fast passed action, although story and other control will be available between levels. At the beginning of the game you select between a faction and presented a brief background story.
+Xonotic single player will become a strategic fps. Eventfully carrying game modes to multilayer. Focus will stay on fast-paced action, although story and other control will be available between levels. At the beginning of the game you select between a faction and presented a brief background story.
 The menu between first person matches will be of a solar system, which then zooms out to the local interstellar group, much like the game star control 2 http://sc2.sourceforge.net/. Battles take place on potentially habital planets, moons, space stations and asteroids. Much of the story can revolve around a main event. An example being the synchrotron particle accelerator being constructed around a gas giants asteroid belt in the effort to create civilizations first interstellar warpzone.
 
 h2. Background
 
-With Earth polluted and over populated, due to capitalism taking full force in the early 3rd millennium, technology and production thrived. Creation of the fussion reactor lead to an abundance of energy available to the world. Although this was monoplised by Global Industries, a mega conglomerate. With corporations more powerful than the government, many fled to new worlds hoping to escape the monopoly of a few elite and the corporations they hide behind.
-The major gap between the rich and poor lead to the Rebel Alliance being formed. The Rebels where able to cease control of partly terraformed mars in the 22nd century. Global Industries share prices plummeted leading to a temporary peace.
-With Artificial Intelligence observed in most supercomputers, focus lead into creating a private artificial army. This only lead to more problems. Robots were disobedient. With collectively thinking between artificial intelligences taking place without human knowledge, eventually the robot army crated to destroy the rebels, left the solar system to pursue their own endeavors. They have not been found since.
+With Earth polluted and over populated, due to capitalism taking full force in the early 3rd millennium, technology and production thrived. Creation of the fusion reactor led to an abundance of energy available to the world, but was monopolized by Global Industries, a sprawling, mega-conglomerate corporation. With corporations more powerful than the government, many fled to new worlds hoping to escape the monopoly of the few elite men and the corporations they hide behind.
+The major gap between the rich and poor led to the formation of the Rebel Alliance. The Rebels where able to cease control of partly terra-formed Mars in the 22nd century. Global Industries share prices plummeted leading to a temporary peace.
+With Artificial Intelligence observed in most supercomputers, focus lead into creating a private artificial army. This only led to more problems. Robots were disobedient. With collectively thinking between artificial intelligences taking place without human knowledge, eventually the robot army created to destroy the rebels, left the solar system to pursue their own endeavors. They have not been found since.
 As Global Industries shifted focused on controlling other star systems...
   
 h2. Factions