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@@ -96,9 +96,9 @@ Until recently, the founders of the Xonotic[link] project have been Nexuiz[link]
 
 On March 3rd, 2010, IllFonic announced[AT link] their acquisition of a commercial, closed-source license for Nexuiz and its game engine, together with rights to the game's name.
 
-Following their announcement, a large portion of the community joined together to create Xonotic[link] to continue development under a new name and with a better development process. Beyond being a first person shooter based on Nexuiz (GPL), the Xonotic project aims to be a rethink and reorganization of how a community creates an open source video game and organizes the services around it. We believe that under the existing circumstances this is the only way that allows the project to remain free, open-source and community-based.
+Following their announcement, a large portion of the community joined together to create Xonotic[link] to continue development under a new name and with a better development process. We firmly believe that under the existing circumstances this is the only way that allows the project to remain free, open-source and community-based.
 
-Xonotic[link] will be run by a small team of volunteers with no one in total control. All significant decisions will be made by an elected body of six people.
+One of the main goals of the Xonotic[link] project is a rethink and reorganization of how a community creates an open source video game and organizes the services around it. It will be run by a small team of volunteers with no one in total control. All significant decisions will be made by an elected body of six people.
 
 // Not sure if it's correct: Xonotic 1.0 is planned to be released in about 6 months. Today a compatibilty pack has been released that will rebrand Nexuiz 252.