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-All too often the paths that lie ahead of us lead us to crossroads which we had not foreseen. The Nexuiz [link] community recently arrived at such a crossroad [link] and after much discussion many of us have decided that it was time for a fresh start in a new direction, a direction which stays true to all that which has taken us so far while eliminating that which has held us back. This new direction will focus on the momentum of our community and reforge the project around it
+The Nexuiz [link] community recently arrived at a difficult crossroad [link] and after much discussion many of us have decided that it was time for a fresh start in a new direction, a direction which stays true to all that which has taken us so far while eliminating that which has held us back. This new direction will focus on the momentum of our community and reforge the project around it
 
 It is therefore with great pleasure that we formally announce the birth of Xonotic [link], a free (GPL), fast-paced first-person shooter and direct successor to Nexuiz. Xonotic is a rethink of the Nexuiz project which recognizes that the community around it is its principle driving force and which will restructure itself to respect that. In particular this means that there will be no single person with total control over the project. In additon to the sharper focus on the community, Xonotic will also pursue a clearer agenda which includes the following:
 
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 > # Perhaps add a passage about who the Xonotic team is (Nexuiz developers, contributors, etc) and an open invitation to for others to get involved.
 > # I've re-ordered the project changes to place emphasis on the community focus and artistic direction of the project. Most users couldn't care less about the VCS or general PR but will be excited about a new artistic direction and more contributions.
 > # Maybe change "birth" to "launch".
+> # Original opener (deemed too dramatic): "All too often the paths that lie ahead of us lead us to crossroads which we had not foreseen. The Nexuiz [link] community recently arrived at such a crossroad [link]..."